Writing a STORY:D

When writing a story, your story must passed through this 5 aspect, which is LANGUAGE, STORYBOARD, CREATIVITY, ACTOR’S CRITERIA and SETTING. This post will guide you step by step on making a magnificent story, as better than mine! :D

  1. Language

Your language is important! Without language, anyone or everyone doesn’t know what’s your story and what do you want to express about. Use an International language, such as English(probably), France or German. Hindi and Melayu also acceptable but some of the readers can’t understand some of it. Also, use a better and bombastic english. Good grammar also important. You must maximize the grammar and minimise the errors.

  1. Storyboard

In enhancing and emphasizing your story, you must have your storyboard. It is not necessary for you to draft the storyboard from the first until the last but try to take the main point and elaborate more on it. Try to elaborate and not to relate. If you relating and item with the point, you may find a complicated situation where you need to rearrange the sentence. And also, try to start with a dialog or a bombastic phrase either than “Once upon a time…” or “In a morning…”. That will make your readers start to enjoying your story.

  1. Creativity

Decorate your story with these three angles steps. At the bottom-left, you put intro. At the top, you put climax. At the bottom-right, you put closure. Decorate your intro with the characters and intro settings. Then, decorate your climax with your main point. Make your main point become more action or adventurous. Or even, you can make a sad climax. Then, enhance your closure with a sad or happy setting. You can also describe their feelings and their condition after the climax.

  1. Actor’s Criteria

Try to describe your actor with an interesting criteria. Don’t just simply put “Handsome” or “Cute” or whatever related to a basic criteria. Try to put “white-american guy” or what. Describe more.

  1. Setting

And finally, settings. Put an interesting settings on any of your storyboard. Don’t just put in a house or in a jungle. That is not an interesting place. Try to put, beside a coffee house or under a dark tunnel. It can make your story more interesting to be read.

And you’re done! Hopefully, with these 5 main aspect, you can make a story better than mine! But, I’ll try to beat you guys! Hahaha:D See ya later:)

Posted May 18, 2012. Filed under Tutorials. Leave a comment?

When it is a HOPE (Part 1)

This guy. He is a truly caring guy. He is Harry. He had coupled with a girl name, LeAnna. They had been together since they LeAnna in high school. Now, Harry is at the 8th grade while LeAnna is 2 grade lower than him. Both of them are just born to be together.

Summer ends and both of them back to the school. Before summer, their class teacher, Miss Elizabeth had told LeAnna that there will be a new student coming to their class after this summer holiday. As what as their teacher told her, the new student step in the class and stood in front of the class. He is Zach. A Highworks High School student, athlete and also a handsome person. When he looks at LeAnna, he just felt that he just entered the right school.

LeAnna, quite caring girl and lovely girl. She can fits with anyone, upon her beautiful eyes. If anyone stare at her, they will lose it. Because, she just beautiful on anyone’s eyes. If you compare her with a rose, she is more beautiful than rose.

Harry. A darker guy but friendly. He is the leader of everything. Fact, he likes to play badminton but he doesn’t like football. Different from Zach. His friendly and what does he love is FOOTBALL. LeAnna like a guy who is more to sports. The perfect match for her is Zach. How about Harry? Can he survive with his love?

The story continues on the next episode.

Posted May 9, 2012. Filed under Love stories. 1 comment.

It’s the CAMPUS LIFE

It is the last week Jessica and Louis in their campus. Both of them were sad because Jessica need to move to a new country and both of them will not be in the same place. “It’s ok, Louis. Our friendship still remain right?” said Jessica.

The last day is the Prom Night. Louis and Jessica will performing a drama “Pince and Princess Prom”. Jessica and Louis will be the Prince and Princess. Both of them are accepting their part with an open hands.

A day before the prom night. They had make a full rehearsal at the Theater Hall. Everything works as it was. They rehearsed as what as they hoped. Unfortunately, while Jessica played her scene, she got a phone call saying that her father had been hospitalized due to heart attack. After she knows it, she was shocked and act like a crazy person. She just can’t accept the truth that her father’s condition is worse from day to day. Alas, Louis had comfort her and she had accept everything.

The prom night, the day had come. Both of them had prepared a full preparation today. Even though Jessica is not in her mood, but she doesn’t want to spoil the prom night. Lights, camera and action. Jessica and Louis had performed a marvellous presentation in front of 1000 campus students and 100 teachers. It was a magnificent night. And, both of them were ready to be separate as they still remember their CAMPUS LIFE.

Everything in this story is not related to people around the world. If this story had related to you, we’re sorry. We just typing and publishing it.

Posted May 6, 2012. Filed under . Leave a comment?

A day to remember

“A day. Today is the day. A day to remember,” said James in a sunny sunday. He woke up earlier today and trying to remember what he need to do today. As usual, after he ate the breakfast, he go walking on the street. But today, it’s different. He tried to remember a thing what he had forgot last time.

“Okay. See you there. Bye,” James hang up his phone after making a phone call with his loved one, Jillian. Jillian is a girl who is studying in a same campus with James. They had been together since high school. Today, Jillian’s parents had made a big decision, which could broke someone’s heart and combine two hearts becoming one.

Jillian lives 3 houses beside James house. They just so close as they are more than friends. James best friend, Arthur also lives in the same block with James and Jillian. One thing that James and Jillian doesn’t know is Arthur also have an opened heart with Jillian. To describe Jillian, Jillian is just a perfect girl in both of them. But, Jillian loves James most.

Today, Jillian needs to tell James about the thing that her parents had decided for her. It is for the future. Jillian’s heart will be seperated and combined again. So, as promised, Jillian meets James at a coffee house near to their neighbourhood. This is the conversation at the coffee house among James and Jillian:

Jillian : James, I have something to tell you. I hope you can accept it and there is no fighting among us.
James : Ya? Sure. I felt awkward with it. What happened? Someone disturbing you?
Jillian : I know we had been together for a long time. Since high school. But, after I tell you this thing, we will not be able to do more stuff together.
James : Ok . So, what do you want to tell me?
Jillian : Since my parents saw your best friend, Arthur, they want me to make a close relationship with him. I refuse them to not but they keep asking me. I can’t make any decision so I follow what they want.
James : What? Is it true?
Jillian : Yes. Everything is true. Plus, they wanted to propose me and Arthur after we graduate. And, I hope you can come to our wedding reception. I know it’s hard to accept but that’s the real thing.
James : Ok. That’s fine. I will try to accept it. Maybe it’s hard for me to accept it but I’ll try.

Then, both of them ended the conversation and leave the coffee house with sadness and tears.

Finally, James remember everything. 14 April 2004, Arthur and Jillian wedding. Although he can’t accepted it, but it is A day To Remember.

Story created by admin. All of the names written are for illustration purposes. This story doesn’t relate to others.

Posted Apr 22, 2012. Filed under Sad Stories, Love stories. Leave a comment?

Story will be published in MAY!

Hey guys! We will publish this story in May! Stay tuned, ok?

This are the lists of the story:

    A life without love
    Flying papers
    History love
    God knows everything

If you want to request a story, don’t hesitate to comment! (Since the form is still undergo the creating process).

So, thanks!

Posted Apr 21, 2012. Filed under UPDATES. Leave a comment?

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